so I'm working in a new draw and I want to know a opinion of yours about it. I has a problem in the proportions of the girl and I still thinking that is wrong. so your opinion are welcome . thanks


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sorry but my englis isn't good

sinx,

I can see subtle differences...a wee bit here and a wee bit there...at this stage in the game...it would be difficult to make the corrections as you have layed in the darker values...the adjustments I see are slight...in the girls jawline and the positioning of her ear...those are adjustments that I would have tried to work out in the outline before laying in the first layers of graphite...but hey hind sight is 20/20:)....really this isn't to far off...this is just my humble opinion...This is fantastic work regardless!

Good luck!
Laura

The lines in the picture are muted ...so to draw that on paper is a job in itself for me .. I like lines or I get lost ...I also agree with laura about the jawline and ear ...making changes now would seem to me to be far more difficult then to just leave it ...the drawing is a wonderful drawing .

so... I tried to make it better but I don't think that change very

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and thanks for your time to post here your opinion

I would lighten the shading of the corner of the eye nearest the nose, you have obliterated detail by going so dark, I would dab at it with a kneaded eraser and restate the details a bit.

so I has seeing so much problems in this draw that I will restart it so when I have news about it I post again.
thank you so much for your time and coment I really appreciate it bye

do not give up on this .. your doing fine .