[attachmentid=3842]here is the lesson i did of bitty from brendas lessons....can i have commments please?

This is very good Laurie!:)

If I were to say anything at all about it, it would be just to I suggest you keep your pencil well sharpened and to build up the values of the shading (making them darker) gradually with one layer over the other rather then to go dark in one go with pencil pressure.

You're doing very, very well! Keep it up.

thanks rose....yeah i realise that now that it wasnt sharpe enough...thanks for pointing that out
laurie

Laurie --

I'm so happy to see your success with this lesson -- great job!

To Rose's suggestions, I'd add that you can make neater looking shaded areas by making all your shading lines go in the same direction. These are called "hatching lines," and there are many lessons specifically about hatching and cross-hatchine.

I love it and I see alot of improvemnet from your last work .. you should be proud hun .
I would like to see even lines so her hair stands out also .

thanks....i see that now...silly meee... i ddint understand hatching but i do now....