Me in my soviet air force uniform

i dress like this everyday being a bit eccentric

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you need some good practice of human proportions.

Elena can you please point out exactly whats wrong with it?

ok. The ear is way up reaching the head area, the right eye(on the screen) is bigger and lower than the left, the collar around the neck is misplaced on the left side, the neck sticks out of the uniform.

OK
I agree about the ear that is waaaaay to far up so thanks for pointing that out for me

My eyes do show a large difference in size and position this is normal natural asymmetry when I get tired I have a lazy eye

here is the revised version.

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the ear looks better now, you still have the eye and neck problems. If you attach a photo of you i can tell your accuracy.

Thanks Elena - I think I've taken this one about as far as I want to at this point, so I'll take your suggestions here into consideration in subsequent works. I do self-portraits from time to time.