QUOTE (kim1963 @ Jan 28 2009, 07:04 PM)

after looking at the drawing ... I see it looks like you started to do some detail but got tired....detail takes alot of time .....sometimes looking at the whole picture is overwhelming so I will look only at the section I am working on .. I look for any highlights or small strokes like in the feathers ...if you get tired put it down for a day maybe two and go back to it .. you will see your detail and be excited to start again ....I have often used my paint shop to enlarge the image and this made it much easier for me to see the detail I was drawing and a sharp pencil at all times when doing small thin lines so I believe you need a harder lead ....also shading and highlights play a huge part in the quality of the end result .
I think your doing a great job and hopefuly one of the experts on animals will stop in and be able to offer you advice .

good luck and it is looking great so far .
I agree with you Kim, and I think that its something that has happened to us all! Sometimes we hit a drawing so hard and we put so much in to it, that when we wake up the next day to begin again - maybe we arnt in the same frame of mind, or we just pooped out and cant match what weve started - if thats the case just take a break and hit it again the next day!!!