OK... so I started my drawing of Kim. It was going OK but I just wasn't happy with it the further I went on. After I had erased and erased I threw in the towel and decided to start over.
The second round was going OK, better than the first and I was feeling good about . I started entering my downward spiral as I was touching things up so I decided to be done with it.
I like how the second one turned out (except of course for the hair

), the shirt is a mess, I need some major help in that dept. The hand is horrific, I have drawn a few portraits with a hand in it and they turned out pretty good but I don't know what happened to this one. Oh, I forgot one, I tried to do that little wispy hair on her cheek and I shouldn't have ( this is in the second attempt)
Welp... here is my lil' Kim drawing. I'll include the pic of both drawings and a side by side.
Any tips and critiques would be great!
First try
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