Image posted Sep.29th, 2012, viewed 80 times
thanks for the critique Mike, Here's a revised drawing. I got the background
as black as I could. I knocked one of the trees and the background foliage back further. The paper is kind of a cream color, from a field sketch notebook. I left a piece of white paper in the background for correction for your monitor. I won't use cheap field sketch notebook paper for my exercises any more. It doesn't hold the graphite like the good stuff does. I can't get the background any darker without the paper starting to fall apart.
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